Wednesday, May 29, 2013
Summary
In attendance: Mike Redfern, Sue Shaw, Mike Whitney, Heather Wattie and Cindy Postnikoff
Sue facilitated this meeting and provided us with the material. Thanks Sue! We were to have read Chapter 4 from the Creative Writing text we are using. It covered the following: writing what you know and don't know, memory/association, benefits of daydreaming/imagination, using our cultural memory and nostalgia plus the invaluable tools of research.
In a nutshell, the assignment was to take something interesting, fiction or non-fiction and ask yourself, 'What if..?' What if certain details of a character were changed? Cultural events, gender, family size, job etc. Heather did a few short pieces in a free association kind of style starting with 'What if...', using her own life as a base for possible changes using this technique. Sue shared a piece about the pulp mill where many events were interwoven all on the same day, very intriguing idea with details about a work tragedy, war time protests, shady custom officers and a raven's prediction. Mike R. never did the assignment and for the life of me, (because I didn't write it all down), I forgot Cindy and Mike W.'s contribution! Thank God for cut and paste so hope to have theirs in eventually.
We then did an in meeting writing session where we had to pick a period in our lives and capture the cultural details of that time period using the techniques from the chapter we'd read. It was varied and interesting, that at least I remember, with details to be added later if I can get them from my fellow members. Ahhh, the immense value of writing things down. My apologies fellow writers and shan't happen again! See you on Wed. the 12th with pens poised high! Write on!
Thursday, May 9, 2013
In attendance: Mike Redfern, Heather Wattie, Suzanne Shaw, and Sharla Smith
Monday, November 12, 2012
Nov. 20th Assignment
Two of the 10 Commandments for writers as printed in Writer’s Digest
March ’96 are:
#1. Put Thy Work first—not the audience or market
#4. Honour Thy Readers (i.e. Put 'em first, too;)
Keeping in mind these 2 commandments, write about a character's
motivation--it could even be your own. Think about just one of your
own passions/goals/desires/
fictitious person—e.g., the immoral motivator of a villain, if you so
desire…the ambitions of a Koch Bros., par example. Or the family pet,
pet ghost, pet rock or the shackled lover in the loft, as the case may
be.
This Assignment must be 900-1500 words. Not a word more! This is
counting all the connective tissue:, ‘in’, ‘or’ , ‘this’, 'and', etc..
Put your word count on the top of your piece. This will ensure
verbal economy and precision. Think of each word as costing you $5.
You must keep your readers in mind the whole time while you are writing,
for you will be passing your piece to someone else who will read it to
us all.
This way, we will all hear our own writing as our readers would read
it. (Also, we'd each get the same amount of air space and time.)
It’ll also give us an idea if we are doing our best at getting our
ideas, our characters, etc. across to others, while still making it
interesting for most audiences, because we'll each be our own
audience, too. Hearing our own words spoken by someone else will give
each of us some idea of what we have to do to make our writing more
readable and interesting, don't you think?.
Have fun!
Wednesday, October 24, 2012
Oct. 23rd Meeting Summary
members with memories. It continued at Centre 64 with the forgetful.
Colin challenged us to write something readable out of certain words
with the proviso: no two of those words in the same sentence. The
diverse results—some lustful, some humorous, some reflective and some
reminiscent—titillated us all. Next, we read out our individual
manifestos.
Colin’s manifesto expounded on ‘idealism in action’. He described 8
sentient, advanced communities in the world wherein workshops could be
established to focus on solving world-wide issues, e.g.: environmental
issues; creating successful families and successful lives, within a
milieu of better understanding of other cultures to ameliorate sources
of conflict, to identify survival issues and to explore resolutions.
His manifesto is worthy of elaboration and pursuit in a larger
work—maybe even several volumes:)
Heather used an acrostic form for her amazing manifesto and then in free form,
shared a delightful economy of intriguing words and contemplative metaphors,
she conveyed the individual portion of the same sentience Colin was
aiming for worldwide. Heather’s piece needs to be printed, too,
ASAP, as all progressive change starts at the personal level. Even in
times of intense personal turmoil, we are allowed to have fun, for
“dance is sacrament”. As usual, Heather’s writing removes our
psyche-blinders to enable us to view things from many more angles than
before:)
Mike W. described how our possessions can define our individual
manifestos. People may say politically correct things that give the
‘appearance of truth’, but the slogans which grace (or disgrace) their
T-shirts proclaim their real intentions, politics and characters.
Bumper stickers tout our beliefs, too, and you can tell a lot about a
guy from the level of percussion blaring from his car stereo. Lavish
lifestyles on paupers’ pittances could describe many young folks
today. The ‘why’ could be a lazy acceptance of ‘that’s just the way
it is’. (Or is it a fatalistic belief in earth’s imminent end?) We
had a lot to think about after his piece--mainly how do represent
ourselves in public?.
Sue’s Womanifesto proclaimed social justice, economic equality and
environmental conservation. She vowed to employ her one formidable
weapon to accomplish all this. Her weapon? Profound nagging. In
the wise words of Elmer Fudd (or was it Bugs Bunny?), “Be vewy, vewy
afwaid….” (Summary penned by Sue Shaw)
Thursday, October 11, 2012
Summary of meeting Oct. 9th
Writing assignment: 'Revolution'
Mike R. led us on an ideological revolution through his story outline based in El Salvador as experienced in first person through the eyes of two kids or a female school teacher. Present in the story would be the dark elements one may expect in a tense political scenario; rebel attacks on villages, attempted escapes, capture, refugee camps and the fight for freedom and basic human rights. We look forward to seeing how that takes shape.
Colin expounded on a former essay-like piece,'what if my idealism came true?' He included the presence of a Higher Power and an autocratic approach, benevolent leaders, inspiring actions taken community by community worldwide and a big vision for it all. A healthy environment, effective use of technology for communication, a classless society, rights for all were also present. He may do it with a voice representing different countries in a fiction story format.
Sue once again delivered in her naturally humorous vein and shared a piece about Che Guevera at Centre 64 trying to hold a meeting with many interruptions and frustrations, spoken with an accent. There were many chuckles as Che's vision of revolution was lost in the poor dynamics of the meeting!
Mike W. shared his own warm fuzzy revolution of the 24 hours from morning to night on Thanksgiving Day, reminding us of the joys of companionship, cozy beds, the feeling of community in a local congregation, smells of a turkey with all the trimmings, youth at the skate park and the simple pleasure of life to be thankful for and appreciated.
I(Heather) shared a reflection on the bodily 'revolution' that occurs with menopause and how it can compare with adolescence in dramatics on physical and emotional levels!
Mike W. then gave us a writing exercise where we had to give an excuse for not getting the flu shot. These ranged from mystical walks/discoveries in the woods as the setting for the excuse, old tins in the garage wreaking havoc when the mystery contents were tasted, a duck bite and consequent blood clot from the bruise, looking after the evil grandkids of a boyfriend with designs to dye their cat, and keeping the body as a temple for an international rugby match. Lots of laughs and fun! We then got to share a few limericks to finish it all off. Good time was had by all and we plan on gathering at the Sully 5:45 for burger and beer before next meeting! Until then word weavers...
Saturday, September 29, 2012
In attendance: Mike R., Mike W., Colin, Heather and Sue
It was great to reconvene after the summer and touch base again with everyone. We are hoping we will see some new members this year to join the core membership already established. Our assignment was to share about our summer experiences. Colin had many adventurous and touching moments connecting with his collection of grandkids and getting to know them better while enjoying the beauty of the West Cost. Mike R. shared his thoughts of the Platzl being a vibrant place that folks come to and stay if there was enough artistic and creative happenings to pique interest and keep it long enough. He was able to observe the comings and goings of Platzl life while painting murals on some boring windows which drew curious onlookers cuz' something creative and unusual was actually taking place! Sue kept us chuckling with her anecdotes of relatives and her trip to Ontario. Particularly, the peculiarities of rellies who have certain ideas of how to properly use an outhouse! In the midst of all the family dynamics, she made us feel the 'forlorness' of a town that has lost it's way out and the beauty of the rock and water in that part of Canada. Mike W. and spouse survived the transition of organizing and moving stuff from their 40 years of life from one house to another as they packed up their belongings, pawned off possessions, dismantled a workshop and came to settle for good here in the Kimber. Mike will once again grace the ski hill as soon as the snow flies! I, (Heather) shared my summer experiences which highlighted a trip to the coast for a wedding, 75th b-day celebration, time with grown-up daughters and the annual family golf weekend...a carousel of laundry and guests! Loved being in nature as always with new trails discovered and shoes broken in. We finished off by exploring the cool form of the poetic "lune' which Mike R. introduced to us. It felt similar to Haiku but has a 5/3/5 word line format. It wet our appetites to do more! Until next time...
Wednesday, July 4, 2012
Sunday, May 6, 2012
Summary of the May 1st meeting
Wednesday, April 25, 2012
'...and then there were six.' Two gals, Heather and Sue Shaw, joined by Mike R. and 'Mikey', Don and Colin. We shared bits about our favourite authors, some of which were Mike Redfern's pick of Arthur Ransome of the famous 'Swallows and Amazon' Series, Sue who felt carried away by James Clavell even though he was a 'puke' she says. John Grisholm ranked as one of Colin's top five along with Wilbur Smith and Pierre Burton. Don Davies recommended reading Khaled Hosseire(sorry for any misspellings gang) of the 'Kite Runner' fame. Mikey said he was too young yet to have a favourite author but was open to 'Poppa Charlie's input as a seasoned reader and our suggestions of which we gave him many! I shared a different version of the Mother Goose author and the inner lives of the nursery rhyme characters. Mikey then asked us to take something we had heard that day and write from it. Don wrote about his granddaughter who, at only 10 years of age, is already 'rolling in the deep' of her own musical talents which she shares with the world. Colin was struck by the phrase' economy and environment' and waxed poetic for a bit. Sue amused us as always with a quick and funny reflection sprung from, 'they don't make life jackets just to save lives'. I wrote a couple of poems taken from a morning mediation book called 'The Cup of our Lives' and Mike responded to the CBC news that day of a tragic murder. Mikey took 'it's not too late to seek a newer world' from Alistair Maclean and the perspective change that wrought. See you soon word weavers!
Thursday, April 12, 2012
Tuesday, April 3rd meeting summary
Thursday, March 22, 2012
Write On Meeting March 20 Report
Friday, February 17, 2012
missed meeting
Monday, February 13, 2012
Feb. 7th summary
Thursday, January 26, 2012
Jan. 24th summary
Monday, January 16, 2012
Tuesday, January 10th meeting summary
Sunday, December 4, 2011
Write On writers group meeting Nov. 29, 2011
Present: Sue Shaw, Heather Wattie, Don Davies, Mike Whitney, Mike Redfern.
Apologies for absence: Susan Dancer
1. Cabin Fever Daze 2012
It was agreed to book the theatre at Centre 64 for March 3rd 2011, if it is available on that date, for a performance of Cabin Fever Daze. Don, Heather, Sue, and both Mikes are prepared to perform and will ask some musicians and other performers to take part.
We’ll go into planning mode for this in January. (Post-meeting: The theatre is booked for March 3rd but is in use for Off Centre Players rehearsals and set building on the previous Tuesday and Thursday evenings and for a slide show on the cyclorama, which must be white, on the previous Monday. So we will need to be very efficient about back-drop painting, set decorating, and rehearsal.)
2. Write On Journal issue #2
Mike R. is receiving items for inclusion in the second issue of the Write On Journal, which we need to publish in January, leaving time for a third issue in April. The $850 grant from the CKCA for this project must be used before May. Poems, short prose, jokes, artwork, photographs, etc., should be emailed to Mike at redruth@shaw.ca. He will compile, edit, and lay them out for final selection at a meeting in January.
3. Meeting format
It was agreed that, starting in the New Year, we will try to take 20 to 30 minutes each meeting to do writing exercises from a recognized course book in order to improve specific skills, techniques, etc. We can then develop writing assignments to be read at the following meetings to include the use of those skills, techniques, etc. that we have learned and practiced. This will, in effect, be very much like what we do now at each meeting except that we will be using a more structured basis for the writing we do, hopefully leading us to become more effective writers. (Members may explore course material that they have access to and present to the next meeting.)
4. The Blog
Heather thinks that the Write On writers’ group blog needs to be kept up-to-date. No one expressed interest in doing it, as no one is sure just how to operate a blog successfully. Heather will try her best and consult with Nicole who set it up originally.
5. The Writing Exercise
Mike R. was facilitating this meeting and set a 10 minute writing assignment to write a poem or short piece of prose on the topic ‘After the Rain’.
• Don wrote about a perilous crossing of a high pass on icy roads in snowy conditions, narrowly avoiding a serious accident, something he had experienced just a few weeks ago in Utah.
• Sue wrote a grisly tale about a body skewered with a pool cue and with an 8-ball in its mouth.
Mike W. wrote about chickens and ducks greeting the fresh green day following the rain.
Heather wrote 2 poems, one in rhyming couplets which included someone choking on his tie and an onomatopoeia poem about the sound of dripping water.
Mike R. wrote a paragraph about driving on reflective wet roads and a poem about a dog shaking itself.
6. The Writing Assignment
Mike had set a writing assignment at the previous meeting that he had culled from Writers’ Digest. It was to create a cliché-free protagonist – you; choose a career you once contemplated; change your age, gender, race; investigate something that intrigues you; invent a situation that boosts your heart rate; send your character to a place you’d like to visit; and write.
• Mike R. rewrote a chapter from his unfinished mystery novel in which the protagonist was a young, black female detective inspector in London, England, sent out to investigate a possible crime scene where she discovers a dead body.
• Heather wrote a piece in which the protagonist was a gay Flamenco instructor and immigrant who met his soulmate in Walmart. There was a thread of loss/angst woven through as he was asked to release his lover who was suffering with Aids.
• Mike W. did not attempt this assignment.
• Sue wrote an imaginative piece set in a polluted and dangerous future with futuristic technologies ( a carpet mower) and society.
• Don’s protagonist was an idealistic 19 year old female high school grad who applied for a position as a patrol officer whose job it was to collect taxes for the Australian government from the primitive tribesmen in the dangerous and isolated back-country of Papua New Guinea during the days of head-hunters. Other patrol officers had died or been killed doing this job. The story was prompted by Don’s own application for such a job before he trained as a teacher.
7. Next meeting
We’ll meet again on Tuesday, December 13th, at 7 p.m. The writing assignment, which was set by Heather, will be to share your assignment about a Christmas Gone Wrong.
8. Contact person
Don agreed to take over from Heather as the contact person for anyone wishing to join the Write On writers’ group or to find out more about us. Don can be reached at davies41@telus.net.
Wednesday, June 15, 2011
On the cusp of summer...
Thursday, May 5, 2011
And then there were four...
Friday, April 8, 2011
Super power summary!
Monday, March 14, 2011
Since it is World Water Day the assignment topic is Water.
Write 1000 words on any of the following:
* A water adventure.
* Water - the new liquid gold
* Water disasters (drownings, tsunamis, floods, cyclones, contamination, droughts)
* Imagine yourself as a drop of water and describe your journey.
* May the rain wash away your worries.